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My lies are now caught between my thumbs
I'm tired of deceiving everyone,
Nor have I left myself out
Nor have I any doubt
For this piercing feeling
So demanding, like a stubborn child
I'll rather give in
So it'll stop to cry
Had you really thought
That I could be gentle?
For as long as I actually tried
My heart is now lethal
Are you really surprised?
I am...The time I took to realize:
There's no fear, there's nothing left to loose
I took you for granted -if you may-
I'm sorry it was too soon
I'm tired of deceiving everyone,
Nor have I left myself out
Nor have I any doubt
For this piercing feeling
So demanding, like a stubborn child
I'll rather give in
So it'll stop to cry
Had you really thought
That I could be gentle?
For as long as I actually tried
My heart is now lethal
Are you really surprised?
I am...The time I took to realize:
There's no fear, there's nothing left to loose
I took you for granted -if you may-
I'm sorry it was too soon
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I don't think that this poem is good, but I know it expresses some kind of inner truth so I respect my feelings and post it...
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Thank you for taking your time to make such a big comment.
I have never been taught English formally, so I have many mistakes, sorry for that.
"Nor did I let myself out", I have deceived myself, lied to myself, and now I have no doubt that this feeling of guilt, loneliness and pain, has broken me so deep that, there's no escape I can't live by any other ways, I am addicted by my lies as much as they pain me: " I will rather give in, so it (the addiction to lies or my soul ) will stop to cry", my soul is rotten.
My soul is cruel and human, I recognize my flaws but I can't seam to have the strength to improve, and in the end, I will continue to give in and take you for granted my love.
I have never been taught English formally, so I have many mistakes, sorry for that.
"Nor did I let myself out", I have deceived myself, lied to myself, and now I have no doubt that this feeling of guilt, loneliness and pain, has broken me so deep that, there's no escape I can't live by any other ways, I am addicted by my lies as much as they pain me: " I will rather give in, so it (the addiction to lies or my soul ) will stop to cry", my soul is rotten.
My soul is cruel and human, I recognize my flaws but I can't seam to have the strength to improve, and in the end, I will continue to give in and take you for granted my love.